The "ed"sentence
try starting your sentence with the ed form of the verb. H makes for a punchy start to a sentence.
Remember the rule: When you have finished your ed phase, place a comma then write test of the sentence.
Some- ed words - Surprised,excited,angered,possessed,committed, electrified, Horrified
Examples: "determined to win Tony pushed himself in the last meters of the sprint."
"Concerned for the well being of the others, the prime minister passed new laws. "
Horrified by the gore, I turned away from the screen .
Committed to work, she focused really hard to complete the work .
Concerned about the numbers, she was shocked about how low about her score was.
Stressed, she rapidly finished her unfinished work
Confused, she couldn't get her work done
Horrified by looking at the mirror, she saw her hair being extremely messy
The Power sentence
If you waffle a lot in your writing, try using a power sentence. Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less get straight to the point
Examples/ Sentences
Money is the root of all evil
What is right isn't always popular.
Work is sometimes hard.
Running is tiring .
Socializing can be very tiring.
Zoe is short.
Pineapple on pizza is good.
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