Write that essay sentences #3

 The "ed"sentence 

try starting your sentence with the ed form of the verb. H makes for a punchy start to a sentence.

Remember the rule: When you have finished your ed phase, place a comma then write test of the sentence.

Some- ed words - Surprised,excited,angered,possessed,committed, electrified, Horrified 

Examples: "determined to win Tony pushed himself in the last meters of the sprint."

"Concerned for the well being of the others, the prime minister passed new laws. "

Horrified by the gore, I turned away from the screen .

Committed to work, she focused really hard to complete the work .

Concerned about the numbers, she was shocked about how low about her score was.

Stressed, she rapidly finished her unfinished work 

Confused, she couldn't get her work done

Horrified by looking at the mirror, she saw her hair being extremely messy

The Power sentence

If you waffle a lot in your writing, try using a power sentence. Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less get straight to the point

Examples/ Sentences

Money is the root of all evil

What is right isn't always popular.

Work is sometimes hard.

Running is tiring .

Socializing can be very tiring.

Zoe is short.

Pineapple on pizza is good.

Write that Essay: Sentences

Adverb- describes a verb

Verb- Doing word (Running,Walking,Crawling and etc)

Preposition- A word that gives location or movement 

The Adverb Sentence.

Start the sentence with an adverb, it adds interest and intrigue.

Remember the rule: When you start the sentence with an adverb you need to put a comma after the adverb and then finish the sentence.

Some adverbs- (slowly,Interestingly,suddenly Surprisingly, Simply, Excitedly, Unfortunately, Confusingly, Concerningly, Remarkably, significantly and Firstly.

Example- Surprisingly, Mrs Handely was on time to class.

Must Do - 2-3 Should DO 3-5 can do 5+ sentences

Excitedly, she woke up with a pet kitten on her bed. 

Confusingly, she couldn't find her phone. 

Concernigly, she couldn't find her family.

Suddenly, she saw a bright pink cake.

Shockingly, there was a confetti everywhere.

Loudly, everyone sang happy birthday.

Sadly, it was all just a dream.

The preposition sentence =

Remember the rule:When you start the sentence with a preposition, you need to put a comma when the movement or position ends.

Example:

In 2013,Hornby High accepted Year 7/8 students.

Thought my time at school, have learnt many things.

Prepositions- In, throughout, under, above, between, below, on, around, near, against, within 

Must Do - 2-3 Should DO 3-5 can do 5+ sentences

Under her bed, there was a lost doll

Above table, there was a dove

between the chairs, there is a table

After the hangout, she fell asleep

Near her house, there is a pool 

In her room, there is a lot of clutter 

Coogle essay brainstorm week 2

 Topic: Children under 14 should not be able to have phones 

I strongly disagree with this statement cause I think that Children under 14 should have phones

• Children should have phones to stay in contact with parents when in danger 
• Children should have phones so that they can talk to friends when alone
• Children should have phones to see whats happening around the world
• They need phones to warn their parents if there is something important happening 
• They need phones to learn something new if there is no one around

Children should have phones to stay in contact with parents when in danger 

Children should have phones so that they can talk to friends when alone
Children should have phones to see whats happening around the world

Types of Government ( North Korea Dictatorship)

 TYPES OF GOVERNMENT/ NORTH KOREA

Coogle Essay Brainstorm

ESSAY BRAINSTORM

• I Personally think cats are better pets than dogs
• Cats can clean themselves which dogs are unable to do
• Cats are independent 
• They are easier to train than dogs 
• Cats don't need to walk 
• They are adorable
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 I personally think that cats are better than dogs 

• Cats are easier to train
• Cheaper 
• Cats can get extremely attached

1 minute Speech about Kate Sheppard

 

Kate Malcolm also known as Kate Sheppard is a famous activist who fought for women rights, The reason I am writing about her is because without her hard work women would be still in the kitchen cooking and taking care of our children and husbands, She was born in Liverpool at 1847. 

Kate Sheppard was born in Liverpool at 1847 but she then moved to New Zealand during her twenties because she wanted to have more opportunities and wanted to be around and be with her sisters.

 She really wanted women to have rights and was very determined for women to be able to vote. Kate Sheppard was fighting for women's rights and is also a leader of a women's suffrage campaign She had two husbands and a son but was married at 1871.

Kate was able to get 32,000 signatures of people who were also determined got women to vote signed the and 270m long petition.

By Alexis